getting priorities right
in a single file
black ants march uphill to eat
it's their breakfast time
black ants march uphill to eat
it's their breakfast time
* Haiku: A Japanese poem composed of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables.
* One Single Impression prompt: single
11 comments:
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I loved the visual imagery this evoked. Wonderful!
Ants moving up the hill. Small, but formitable in numbers.
I can see them.
Ants are so fun to watch.
A formidable image, to be sure.
clear image. gentle spirit of compassion in the words somehow.
"each keeps single file"?
in single file makes sense but the "a" throws me.
Always good to remember when it's breakfast time! Very visual!
Thankyou all.
Pearl, you got me thinking. The amends are on the way. Thanks again.
Nice image!
lol.. what a different take for single! lovely! :)
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