follow me
whence i ask, thence you follow
i set the pace in this alaskan race
I AM MY MUSHER's LEAD DOG
i set the pace in this alaskan race
so, whence i ask, thence you follow
* this is the naisaku form of poetry - too little rules, too much fun!
* whence/thence to mean wherefrom/therefrom
* sunday scribblings prompt: follow
i set the pace in this alaskan race
I AM MY MUSHER's LEAD DOG
i set the pace in this alaskan race
so, whence i ask, thence you follow
* this is the naisaku form of poetry - too little rules, too much fun!
* whence/thence to mean wherefrom/therefrom
* sunday scribblings prompt: follow
9 comments:
:) i have never read this kind of poetry and as a first timer, i m impressed!
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I like the NaisaiKu!
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Clever NaisaKu! Your words work so well in this format!
This is the first time i have read naisaiku form of poetry, and i have to tell you that it is an interesting read.
Thankyou all for your kind words, they are much appreciated. Americanising Desi, the Warrior Poet, do join the Naisaiku Challenge, you could use the link at the bottom of the post. Thanks.
your facility with this verse form is wonderful --- and the verse itself a real treat!
Hey buddy Its amazing ....I am looking forward your next work.Excellent rhyming.Wonderful...
Thank you for stopping in at my blog and your kind words. I haven't a talent for poetry, but can appreciate those who do. You are a talented writer also.
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