the "me" mentality
'I' for the identity, 'I' for being selfish
that 'I'-rules-the-world is only a cliche
REPLACE 'I' WITH A 'V' AND WHAT A DIFFERENCE YOU WILL SEE!
for 'I'-rules-the-world is only a cliche
let 'I' be for identity, never 'I' for being selfish.
* Totally Optional Prompt: to meditate on a letter, any letter and write about it.
* this is the naisaku form of poetry - too little rules, too much fun.
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that 'I'-rules-the-world is only a cliche
REPLACE 'I' WITH A 'V' AND WHAT A DIFFERENCE YOU WILL SEE!
for 'I'-rules-the-world is only a cliche
let 'I' be for identity, never 'I' for being selfish.
* Totally Optional Prompt: to meditate on a letter, any letter and write about it.
* this is the naisaku form of poetry - too little rules, too much fun.
Join The Naisaiku Challenge
7 comments:
Yes, This is perfect! I like how you stress the I of identity
I'm going to put your link in the Mr. Linky so more people will see it.
Thanks for participating!
Yeah Cool!
Very nice!
IT’S NOT FUNNY . . . OR IS IT?
This is very nice! I like the contrast of the I and the not I...
That 'I' gets the world into so much trouble.
Thankyou Linda, for putting up the Linky thingy for me. I am so glad you liked the poem. Thanks.
SweetTalkingGuy, Sue@Tumblewords, I cannot thankyou enough for you lovely comments each time. Do keep coming... please :)
Linda(@Nickers and Ink), Anthony, glad to have you over. and thanks for liking the poem.
I todays world, the I is on tops. People only tend to think of themselves. I like this!
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